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Critique

Reading over it, the story feels a bit rushed. I wanted the screencaps to feel like individual moments but it feels like a rushed telling of a story. Technically, I'm mostly pleased with how it turned out. Its clean and consistent in format. The times when I had to really go in and fix details in the screenshots are cleaner than I expected them to be and at a glance you really couldn't tell that I messed with some of them. With some its more obvious. I feel like it conveys an LGBT+ romance without making the fact that they are the same sex a bigger deal than the romance itself. 


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