Critique

Just style-wise, I don’t think my product turned out particularly appealing as I wished it would. The coloring of the image might make it blurry to some audience, and I’m not sure if everyone can distinguish the background barcode image, which is very essential to my product. Content-wise, maybe it’s not enough to illustrate my idea and thoughts on consumerism through images of women obsessing over some products, because indeed it’s not only women who are driven by the motivations I mentioned before to make unnecessary or impulsive purchases. Also, I think my product would come across as criticism to people who love to shop, which is not my intention, and I had a hard time trying to resolve this issue.