Critique

I wish I had put more effort into keeping the quality of my photos high quality; the pixels become quite obvious (the more you stare at the video), and it ruins the entire effect of the video, I feel like, where I try to make everything seamless. I also both wish the experience of watching this video was both more exciting and less overwhelming at the same time; there is both a lot going on, and yet nothing going on at all. It was an interesting topic to work with, but in terms of virility, it may lack a sort of spreadability that captures someone's attention quickly and holds it with a vice grip. I feel like I thoroughly explored the idea of static versus dynamic, which was the goal, but there were some things that could be cleaned up and expanded upon.