Critique / Personal Reflection

I think that the video was successful in executing its core concept: removing the payoff from short clips and leaving raw anticipation behind. Despite this, I still see a number of problems with the final work. Firstly, I’m still not convinced that the idea of the video is conveyed to the viewer - I feel that as of right now many viewers will not “get it” and shut off the video. Secondly, I feel that the pacing of the video could be improved. In fact, not much thought was put into the ordering of the video or the exact timings between videos. With this in mind I feel that the overall “feel” of the video could be made more smooth with a bit more moulding on my part.