I like how this picture turned out in regards to composition and brightness. I like how her white skin stands out against the dark wall, although I think it would have turned out better if there a more intense contrast. Like the previous portrait, I put a light source behind me, but I think it would have turned out better if I moved the light closer and made the picture brighter. However, I do like how the picture is framed around her, with her face being the general center of the portrait and her hand gesturing the viewer to pay attention to the face.