Feedback

The feedback was extremely helpful, and lead to some pretty significant changes that helped a lot. For starters, just about everybody said to drop the TV's with a couple suggestions to adopt cell phones since they really embody singularity and isolation, and the second composition was generally liked more than the third. It was suggested that I drop the smaller being as well, as it didn't really add much. It seemed like the religious vibe was a lot stronger than I intended, as I was really more focused on communication, so I decided to make the obsession or worship of technology a little more subtle by having each of the beings holding a cell phone in a manner reminiscent of praying. However, since many usually hold their cell phones in this way, it is much more subtle than the kneeling in the previous compositions.