Self-Reflection

In broad strokes, I definitely don't think my piece is horrible, but I do think with more time it could be better. The sound effects are probably the best part, and they sound authentically cartoony and are integrated with the piece well. It is kind of strange that the tone switched between the 'light' and 'dark' sections of the video, but that is also a nice effect.
However, the background music is a little lacking, and could do with more time. At best, it's really just a shallow 'space-filler' and sometimes even detracts from the piece. Additionally, the piece is really thematically disparate. Different parts of the music don't really match up: the soft base line that starts the piece is very different from the waterfall of piano notes at the end, which is very different from the guitar riff at the end. It lacks a lot of unity.