Your egg picture is so great! It's so weird that they print the expiration date on each individual egg. Love it. Your asymmetrical composition is really well-balanced, it's lit gorgeously, your shallow focus is nice and shape right on the bright edge of the egg, and the rough texture of the blanket looks great paired with the smoother texture of the egg. You did a great job making a boring object visually interesting.
I think that the egg photo is the most striking in part because it has the biggest range of values (i.e. bright and dark areas.) Work on replicating that in your other photos. The long exposure of Mauricio typing is nice, but it's a little greyed out. It's nothing some Photoshopping can't fix, but it's better to get it in the original shot if you can. It's just hard to get a broad range of values if you're shooting in a low-light environment like the one in which you shot Mauricio.
Your egg picture is so great! It's so weird that they print the expiration date on each individual egg. Love it. Your asymmetrical composition is really well-balanced, it's lit gorgeously, your shallow focus is nice and shape right on the bright edge of the egg, and the rough texture of the blanket looks great paired with the smoother texture of the egg. You did a great job making a boring object visually interesting.
I think that the egg photo is the most striking in part because it has the biggest range of values (i.e. bright and dark areas.) Work on replicating that in your other photos. The long exposure of Mauricio typing is nice, but it's a little greyed out. It's nothing some Photoshopping can't fix, but it's better to get it in the original shot if you can. It's just hard to get a broad range of values if you're shooting in a low-light environment like the one in which you shot Mauricio.
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