Curiosity

I like how you use two different instruments to play the same melody, it sounds like they are fighting each other and it creates a sense of tension for the listener. It definitely grabs listener's attention, and listener will not be distracted by other things, and will focused on the "fighting".

I agree with Dan about using the two different instruments for the same melody, the different tones of the instruments does enough to capture the listener's attention with discord even though the melody is quite harmonious. The only problem with the piece is that it stops quite abruptly without really ending the phrase.

We have to bear in mind that this are very short pieces and then if we want to give a sense of completeness we have to build a bit better the endings. The piece is basically composed with repetition and then the second voice starts to build its own way (a different melody): this is related with the concept of continuity at Belkin's book: the melody that repeates gives continuity and the one that changes gives variety, all in a smooth way since one of the melodies continues repeating.

There's a definite contrast going on in the second half of the piece that I think is kind of interesting because the notes are all in time but the two voices keep jumping in each other's ways. I think it might be a little too much but you definitely accomplished what you were going for, so good job on that.

The clashing instruments do create a tension for the listener as it keeps them on edge throughout the latter half of the piece. The melody is catchy but once they start mixing, it becomes confusing but interesting at the same time. Good job!

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