I thought your project was really interesting. I really like how you used articles to enhance the amount of information given and the examples you chose were great. The one comment I have is that the documentation was slightly confusing the first time I read it. It was probably because I was slightly skimming, but after the first read-through I didn't understand what the illusion was and I didn't understand how exactly the pieces of art that you used as examples created this illusion. I think its because since you're talking about an illusion that occurs only when your senses are deprived and I'm looking at pictures of people experiencing it, I can't tell what the illusion is. I think what might help is to use more varied examples and to go into more depth about what people experience. The piece where you feel like you're in a kaleidoscope would be good to talk about and with the article I think it would have added to your project. Also, this is slightly tangent but would you happen to know if mirages in dessert are also because of this effect or does this effect not create illusions at that scale?
I thought your project was really interesting. I really like how you used articles to enhance the amount of information given and the examples you chose were great. The one comment I have is that the documentation was slightly confusing the first time I read it. It was probably because I was slightly skimming, but after the first read-through I didn't understand what the illusion was and I didn't understand how exactly the pieces of art that you used as examples created this illusion. I think its because since you're talking about an illusion that occurs only when your senses are deprived and I'm looking at pictures of people experiencing it, I can't tell what the illusion is. I think what might help is to use more varied examples and to go into more depth about what people experience. The piece where you feel like you're in a kaleidoscope would be good to talk about and with the article I think it would have added to your project. Also, this is slightly tangent but would you happen to know if mirages in dessert are also because of this effect or does this effect not create illusions at that scale?
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