October 6th, 2014
I think you captured the sparseness of Lee's photographs. The first image is especially strong, with a frame within the frame of the photo. As you acknowledge, some of the photos are a little blown out. If you want, I can show you in lab on Friday how to adjust the blacks and still preserve that bright negative space in the background.
I really like how you used the natural geometry to shape your images. I think that this was the strongest in the first image, and perhaps the second. You definitely focused on the clarity of the image, and used the negative space as a subject in and of itself. I would have liked to see the last image be a little bit more clear and precise like the others, because it looks like it would have had an interesting contrast and horizon line, but the blurriness blends the shapes in with the clear sky.
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