Justice Frimpong - Retell Me a Story
Made by jfrimpon
Made by jfrimpon
Take an existing story and spin it in my own way to tell a different story.
Created: November 5th, 2015
Take an existing story and spin it in my own way to tell a different story.
I didn't find it bothersome if the clips didn't match up exactly. Quite the contrary, rather. I think you worked together the visual clips and the audio quite well. I was impressed by the timely editing after the first ten seconds and the third stanza, among other places. The use of silence in the last section was impactful.
I did notice small editing hiccups at around the 57th, 66th, and 113th seconds, although how much they can be buffered out seems to rely on the technology available. Those bits would be the first thing I'd suggest to fix if this project were revised.
I thought the scenes chosen matched well with the audio. The emotions of the scenes were well portrayed in the song, and vice versa. I definitely see how the story was told in a different light, and what the meaning of luxury meant in the context of the movie.
One thing I would change in the future is to have some kind of sound at the final parts. I think it would have more of an impact if the song ended abruptly with Hazel closing her eyes. Otherwise, the song and video editing was very well done and smooth in transitions.
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