liu-roger: Field Exercise 1.1 (Exposure)
Made by Roger Liu
Made by Roger Liu
The goal of this project is to document my encounters with media throughout one day and make insightful commentary on those encounters
Created: September 4th, 2015
The goal of this project is to document my encounters with media throughout one day and make insightful commentary on those encounters
The project is very structured, which makes for an easy and clear reading. If I had to make a suggestion, I would recommend maybe breaking out of the structure here and there (or even just in tone) to keep the reading more interesting. The stiff, formal text makes the project sound somewhat less personal, though this is perhaps only a matter of taste, since I prefer to play around with my work. There is a good mix of different types of media present, both outdoors and indoors, which is nice. It might be improved with more examples, though one can only encounter so many noteworthy forms of media in a day.
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