Created: November 13th, 2016
I really liked both the story and execution of this performance. I particularly liked how you guys actually used the narrator as a character. A lot of times people choose not to take advantage of the narrator as someone who breaks the 4th wall, so I thought that was interesting. The actual performance was very clean and engaging throughout a large majority of its duration. The only bad point I have to say is about the audience participation. I did like the idea behind a lot of the choices as the choices themselves and how they were made actually had meaning, but I would have liked to have seen it a bit more refined. Things would get kind of hectic at certain points and it was not very clear if that was the intention. But other than that great work!