November 22nd, 2014
Raisa, I really liked your simple, clean style. I think it worked well as a rough outline of your pieces. However, I think some of your compositions may have been too simple, and they may have omitted parts of the original photograph that were key to setting the tone of the photograph. For example, your manmade structure photo was my favorite because it was complex and intricate, and it had many different shapes and lines. I thought you could have incorporated this sense of complexity more into this composition.
The documentation here is great. Each composition is well described and clearly separated from each other - nice use of headers. The clarity could be improved by adding the original images inline or a link to the previous project - someone who is unfamiliar with the previous project will not know the images you used.
The simple, well conceived approach you have taken is excellent and works well; you've clearly thought about how to communicate effectively with as little visual information as possible. The connection to Kandinsky is also well made.
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