November 17th, 2014
I commented on On Women, Death by Malloc, and Chinese Room Argument.
I think that the loops that you used in this piece worked really well together, and you transitioned them in really smoothly. For instance at 35 seconds in I didn't even notice the more energetic piano transition in, but then I felt an increase in emotion in the piece (it was very natural). At first I was thinking that it might be interesting to add more change in the middle, for example a change in key or another loop for a little while, but your ending definitely caught me off guard and you worked with the recording in building your ending, which worked well.
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