Reflection
I would definitely change the font I used for Beret Guy's speech into something that matches his personality better. Not quite Comic Sans, but something along those lines. I would also use a tablet to get neater drawings when adding my own content. Experience with a pencil does not translate to a laptop touch pad very well.
Given the nature of webcomics, many of which result in financial success without much technical artistic skill, I could conceivably make money with this work. I would need to create similar pieces almost daily, post them to a website of my own, and incorporate advertisements into that website in order to make money from this, but it could conceivably happen.