yijingc--Assignment 1

This journal was very well organized! I had a clear sense of context for each experience. I did feel like the journal often lost sight of the intent of the assignment, and when it did focus on interaction with media instead of day-to-day tasks, it lacked a degree of depth that I'd hoped to see. I also pretty keenly noticed the lack of images in the journal - even just a screencap can bring a lot of worthwhile information. There was definitely a strong sense of structure and description that I think could really have been used to better suit the assignment's requests. The text posted separately from the .doc was a good reflection on your experiences though! I think that sort of commentary was spot on for the assignment.
Consisely, I'd say less description of routine tasks (waking up wanting more sleep, putting phone in pocket) and more reflections like the one separate from the file would be a solid path!