Kristen Smith
Posted on 2014-11-19 16:25:57 -0500.
I like how you managed to keep the listener's attention despite not having a melody. The shift in tempo and mood towards the end was captivating, though I felt like you could've stuck with the jazz vibe a bit longer (I recognize that the piece could only be so long but maybe the jazz portion could've been larger proportionally). It felt like it was just starting and gaining momentum right before it ended.
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Jacob Weiss
Posted on 2014-11-19 16:56:29 -0500.
I like the idea of experimenting with drums in Logic! It was a really fun listen, and I wish it went on for longer. The transition between the rock and jazz sections was pretty cool, and didn't seem forced or jerky at all (which it easily could have if not done right).
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Ivan Wang
Posted on 2014-11-19 18:25:04 -0500.
This is pretty cool! I agree with Kristen though and wish the jazz section could be longer. It didn't seem to pick up until near the end of the song.
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Eric Wang
Posted on 2014-11-19 18:26:51 -0500.
This is well done, the drum beat is very on point, and the variations in the middle achieved the effect of putting a groove and it stuck to the roots as well. I feel you could really expand on that part and make this a piece that people can listen to just for the drums.
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Jorge Sastre
Posted on 2014-11-20 01:23:13 -0500.
The drums are interesting, however you are not meeting the minimum requirement of C major key, since the drum set does not have any key. You should take care of the sudden cut fade out.
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Francisco Rojo
Posted on 2014-11-20 01:55:16 -0500.
Commented on "I love youu", "My Little MIDI", and "Random Noises"
I like how you managed to keep the listener's attention despite not having a melody. The shift in tempo and mood towards the end was captivating, though I felt like you could've stuck with the jazz vibe a bit longer (I recognize that the piece could only be so long but maybe the jazz portion could've been larger proportionally). It felt like it was just starting and gaining momentum right before it ended.
I like the idea of experimenting with drums in Logic! It was a really fun listen, and I wish it went on for longer. The transition between the rock and jazz sections was pretty cool, and didn't seem forced or jerky at all (which it easily could have if not done right).
This is pretty cool! I agree with Kristen though and wish the jazz section could be longer. It didn't seem to pick up until near the end of the song.
This is well done, the drum beat is very on point, and the variations in the middle achieved the effect of putting a groove and it stuck to the roots as well. I feel you could really expand on that part and make this a piece that people can listen to just for the drums.
The drums are interesting, however you are not meeting the minimum requirement of C major key, since the drum set does not have any key. You should take care of the sudden cut fade out.
Commented on "I love youu", "My Little MIDI", and "Random Noises"
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