Nice! You created a suspenseful piece very well - I could see this in the beginning of a trailer for an epic movie. I know we could only make a minute-long piece, but I wish it kept building and then turned into something big and loud. I was disappointed at the end because it seemed to be building up to something and then it just stopped.
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Amanda Marano
Posted on 2014-11-24 18:59:58 -0500.
This is a great piece, and I agree with your analysis of it. You captured the mood very well, and I agree with Jacob that it would fit really well in a suspenseful moment in an action film! I also agree that instead of having a lot of closure, it just kind of tapers off, but I think that adds to the suspenseful mood that you created with the rest of your piece.
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Jorge Sastre
Posted on 2014-11-24 21:09:07 -0500.
Good work! Nice and curious use of panning. Good music for a trailer effectively. The complete piece creates suspense all the time but does not build a clear climax. For that you would need to create some progression towars the climax: a crescendo, or increasing tempo, or increasing the number of instruments/layers, etc., or all of them together, and then release all the accumulated tension in some way. Take care also of the clicks with the samples.
Nice! You created a suspenseful piece very well - I could see this in the beginning of a trailer for an epic movie. I know we could only make a minute-long piece, but I wish it kept building and then turned into something big and loud. I was disappointed at the end because it seemed to be building up to something and then it just stopped.
This is a great piece, and I agree with your analysis of it. You captured the mood very well, and I agree with Jacob that it would fit really well in a suspenseful moment in an action film! I also agree that instead of having a lot of closure, it just kind of tapers off, but I think that adds to the suspenseful mood that you created with the rest of your piece.
Good work! Nice and curious use of panning. Good music for a trailer effectively. The complete piece creates suspense all the time but does not build a clear climax. For that you would need to create some progression towars the climax: a crescendo, or increasing tempo, or increasing the number of instruments/layers, etc., or all of them together, and then release all the accumulated tension in some way. Take care also of the clicks with the samples.
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