I think the image of the bench and the image of your friend and your pet mouse are the strongest. I like the angle and shallow depth of field you used for the bench.I think you're right that the balance is a bit off with that big patch of grey on the right hand side, but otherwise the photo is pretty visually busy, so it's sort of a nice place for your eye to rest. I think that you could remedy that just with some dodging and burning (changing brightness of parts of the image.) Same with the image of your friend with the mouse. I think that it's the most well-composed, it's just really dark.
I think the image of the bench and the image of your friend and your pet mouse are the strongest. I like the angle and shallow depth of field you used for the bench.I think you're right that the balance is a bit off with that big patch of grey on the right hand side, but otherwise the photo is pretty visually busy, so it's sort of a nice place for your eye to rest. I think that you could remedy that just with some dodging and burning (changing brightness of parts of the image.) Same with the image of your friend with the mouse. I think that it's the most well-composed, it's just really dark.
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