November 10th, 2014
I like the way you looped some of the sounds. It helped to create a feeling of continuity that made it feel like you were walking through a busy area.
I liked the continuous tapping you incorporated to give the composition a sense of direction. I'm not sure if this was intentional, but I believe I heard some wind noise periodically throughout your composition which broke the continuity a little bit.
This is an incredible example of minimalism at its finest. The original recording was probably a bit tricky to make a "story" from, so I like the way you use the loops and repeats to accentuate certain sounds. The one critique I would suggest is to concern yourself with the background wind noise - it seems to overpower some of your other desired sounds on the mic. I'm not really sure what post-processing options you have available to you though, so that might just be an unfixable issue at the moment. Still, this is a really nice piece!
Thanks all, though regarding the "wind" noise, I think its actually the frying pan sizzling as this was recorded completely indoors and around the food court. But I do agree it might be a little overpowering.
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