November 25th, 2014
In your human movement piece, I thought the dots and lines composition was excellent. Your use of Kandinsky's theories is spot on, and the darker, angular shape of the stationary figure really stands out and draws attention to itself. In the shapes version, however, this effect is somewhat lost by the addition of other full, dark pieces that draw the emphasis away and make the scene feel heavier and less focused. Maybe using some gray tones would help this, as opposed to using exclusively black.
I agree; the first human movement piece is great! I also think you used Kandinsky's ideas of dots and lines very well. I definitely feel more drawn to the first piece than the second one using shapes though. Maybe you could have used shapes that are less dense, since they seem to throw the image off balance a bit?
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