Katherine Martinez
Posted on 2015-09-15 09:17:41 -0400.
You did a really good job analyzing the breakdown you chose! I think I would have liked to see more than one breakdown, ie. looking at the number of people in the photo, but the analysis you gave seemed pretty spot on. I also think your graphs were a little unclear - at a glance it was pretty tough to get any info from it. A clearer explanation of the category types, separate from the paragraph, might have resolved this I think. On a much more trivial level, I'm not sure 'the results of this assignment didn't surprise me' is a great thing to say, but that's probably not a big deal. Glad to see this assignment got you interested though!
You did a really good job analyzing the breakdown you chose! I think I would have liked to see more than one breakdown, ie. looking at the number of people in the photo, but the analysis you gave seemed pretty spot on. I also think your graphs were a little unclear - at a glance it was pretty tough to get any info from it. A clearer explanation of the category types, separate from the paragraph, might have resolved this I think. On a much more trivial level, I'm not sure 'the results of this assignment didn't surprise me' is a great thing to say, but that's probably not a big deal. Glad to see this assignment got you interested though!
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