Your project offers a good balance of media description and analysis. Especially interesting was your insight that there was a lot of media forced into your life, regardless of your interests (or disinterests). This was especially apparent because of your emphasis elsewhere on content you were passionate about, which gives readers a sense of the jarring transition when you are interrupted by unwanted ads. Good job on giving background on your followed YouTube channels and games as well.
However, I would have liked to see more of a narrative aspect of your journal, in order to add some continuity to the media encounters and allow the audience to more closely follow your transitions between content. You should have taken a little emphasis away from describing all the different YouTube channels and videos and perhaps widened your focus to other media.
All in all, focused and personalized project with some interesting insight.
Your project offers a good balance of media description and analysis. Especially interesting was your insight that there was a lot of media forced into your life, regardless of your interests (or disinterests). This was especially apparent because of your emphasis elsewhere on content you were passionate about, which gives readers a sense of the jarring transition when you are interrupted by unwanted ads. Good job on giving background on your followed YouTube channels and games as well.
However, I would have liked to see more of a narrative aspect of your journal, in order to add some continuity to the media encounters and allow the audience to more closely follow your transitions between content. You should have taken a little emphasis away from describing all the different YouTube channels and videos and perhaps widened your focus to other media.
All in all, focused and personalized project with some interesting insight.
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