Experience-Reproduce

I think the use of spirals in this case was too controlled. You mentioned how you noticed that the text on the original work became more and more illegible as the white enters the foreground. I do like the interleaved black and white spirals though. It captures how history was written by both sides. I think you did accurately portray what you wanted to portray also. The black background as the black spiral leaves the circle does remind me of the bottom of the original work. I think something to take into account could be blurring the spirals and maybe having the black spiral starting out thinner at the center, and wider at the end? Sort of like how the black ink blurs and smudges in the original. Overall, interesting take though!