Kristen Smith
Posted on 2014-11-19 16:23:23 -0500.
This piece was really interesting, and you used Belkin's concept of introducing instruments separately really well. I found myself jamming out to this piece-- the bass line was wonderful. The soft piano notes that you end towards the end were nice. I figured you finished building in instruments but then I heard the soft notes, which contributed to the piece well. I felt that the ending was rather abrupt-- you could have gradually ended the same way you began. Overall, though, I really liked the liveliness of this composition.
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asdfadfa
Posted on 2014-11-19 16:27:03 -0500.
Wow you made this with the Logic piano? That's pretty impressive in itself and the composition was good too. This was well done, nice job.
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Jacob Weiss
Posted on 2014-11-19 16:52:26 -0500.
I really like this! I liked the moment when the drums came in, and how after that the piano came in - that progression was really nice. The background melody near the end was really cool as well.
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Eric Wang
Posted on 2014-11-19 18:22:44 -0500.
I really really like your bass and drum, if you manually made it that is very impressive. Though I feel the melody kind of sticks out too much. I think adding some chords and harmony would help a lot in your case. Overall nice work.
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Ivan Wang
Posted on 2014-11-19 18:33:32 -0500.
I commented on Budum Budum, Adventure Time, and quantizeMix.
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Jorge Sastre
Posted on 2014-11-20 01:17:02 -0500.
Good Work! I appreciate especially the contrapuntal melody that you have added at the last part to the main one. Nice way to give variety. Yes, you could add some chords to make it fuller.
This piece was really interesting, and you used Belkin's concept of introducing instruments separately really well. I found myself jamming out to this piece-- the bass line was wonderful. The soft piano notes that you end towards the end were nice. I figured you finished building in instruments but then I heard the soft notes, which contributed to the piece well. I felt that the ending was rather abrupt-- you could have gradually ended the same way you began. Overall, though, I really liked the liveliness of this composition.
Wow you made this with the Logic piano? That's pretty impressive in itself and the composition was good too. This was well done, nice job.
I really like this! I liked the moment when the drums came in, and how after that the piano came in - that progression was really nice. The background melody near the end was really cool as well.
I really really like your bass and drum, if you manually made it that is very impressive. Though I feel the melody kind of sticks out too much. I think adding some chords and harmony would help a lot in your case. Overall nice work.
I commented on Budum Budum, Adventure Time, and quantizeMix.
Good Work! I appreciate especially the contrapuntal melody that you have added at the last part to the main one. Nice way to give variety. Yes, you could add some chords to make it fuller.
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