I think you chose a super interesting idea that you executed really well. Even knowing the actual order of the story, I could still visualize the story that you were trying to tell. I know in your documentation you said that you didn't want to use video clips but I think they would have helped tell the story a little better because since some of the frames aren't near each other in chronological order the jumping around can be slightly disorientating. Also I think the script idea would be a good idea because I didn't realize it the first time I watched it what some of the scenes were but after reading the script and documentation and watching it again the scenes you picked started making a lot more sense. Overall, it was a really great project. The audio and visuals worked really well together and it was really beautiful to watch and a very uplifting story.
I think you chose a super interesting idea that you executed really well. Even knowing the actual order of the story, I could still visualize the story that you were trying to tell. I know in your documentation you said that you didn't want to use video clips but I think they would have helped tell the story a little better because since some of the frames aren't near each other in chronological order the jumping around can be slightly disorientating. Also I think the script idea would be a good idea because I didn't realize it the first time I watched it what some of the scenes were but after reading the script and documentation and watching it again the scenes you picked started making a lot more sense. Overall, it was a really great project. The audio and visuals worked really well together and it was really beautiful to watch and a very uplifting story.
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