PopArt Composition

I liked that you considered the process Andy Warhol used and then decided that you should also create your own factory process for your images. I think that created a sense of unity among the variety of pictures. I think maybe the reason that your piece didn't quite achieve the impact you wanted was because it was too diverse. I felt like the combination of different pictures with different colors was overwhelming maybe if you just changed the colors on one picture, that would help achieve more impact.

I think that this piece is great. You did a really good job conveying your message through your piece and I think that it made sense to me even before I read your explanation. But I agree with Laura that you may have used too many colors. I like how you used that turquoise color a lot, but you didn't bring it into every picture. Maybe if you reduced the number of colors and got a single color that appeared in all 9 pictures, it would be stronger.

I think you did a really great job of recreating Warhol's style and I really appreciate the subject you chose and I think it definitely captures that sense of consumerism. With that being said, I definitely agree with Laura's comment about how it might have been more successful if you had focused on one particular image and repeated that instead - not only is it more consistent to Warhol's style but I think seeing a person on the phone repeated multiple times over would leave me feeling overwhelmed and to think "Wow, seriously everyone is always on their phones and we all as so attached to our phones