I commented on Smash Choir, 8bit Messing, and "Choirs, and Organs, and Strings. Oh my."
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Amber Jones
Posted on 2014-11-24 18:32:28 -0500.
The fade-in/build up at the beginning was nice. I also liked the transition between the first A and B sections. Is there any reason why you didn't isolate the bass line at the end like it was at the beginning? It almost gives it a different form. It could possible be described as an ABCB form.
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Jorge Sastre
Posted on 2014-11-24 20:41:14 -0500.
Good work, with good proportions. To take care: the melodic loop attracts more the attention than the sampled sounds, but is ok. As I have said before in other comment the pieces are so short that many times we divide them in micro sections with small changes among them (in a bigger piece all this might be a complete section).
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Francisco Rojo
Posted on 2014-11-24 23:14:22 -0500.
You made a really addicting beat with using just sounds sampled from physical actions you did in the moment (which is pretty cool). The synthy loop you put over the beat goes along with the other sounds well. The final stretch of the song, where it transitions to a more breakbeat groove, was refreshing and my favorite part of the piece.
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asdfadfa
Posted on 2014-11-25 00:42:14 -0500.
This was really good, dropping out the bass and then adding it back in with the extra beat kept the same ideas interesting and had me wondering where you were going to go with the piece next.
I commented on Smash Choir, 8bit Messing, and "Choirs, and Organs, and Strings. Oh my."
The fade-in/build up at the beginning was nice. I also liked the transition between the first A and B sections. Is there any reason why you didn't isolate the bass line at the end like it was at the beginning? It almost gives it a different form. It could possible be described as an ABCB form.
Good work, with good proportions. To take care: the melodic loop attracts more the attention than the sampled sounds, but is ok. As I have said before in other comment the pieces are so short that many times we divide them in micro sections with small changes among them (in a bigger piece all this might be a complete section).
You made a really addicting beat with using just sounds sampled from physical actions you did in the moment (which is pretty cool). The synthy loop you put over the beat goes along with the other sounds well. The final stretch of the song, where it transitions to a more breakbeat groove, was refreshing and my favorite part of the piece.
This was really good, dropping out the bass and then adding it back in with the extra beat kept the same ideas interesting and had me wondering where you were going to go with the piece next.
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