November 23rd, 2014
I like how you use the crescendo at the beginning, it definitely helps to prepare the listener to the following high-tension music. The fast tempo shaking nuts sound mixed with the background music makes me feel alarmed and anxious. It sounds like there is going to be a war. And the sudden stop of shaking sound not only makes this piece more intriguing but also let the listener relax for a moment.
The intro was pretty cool and unexpected-- I would never have imagined a bag of nuts could build suspense! The speeding tempo created a lot of excitement and momentum that carried on through the rest of the piece.
I feel like you have a very interesting combination of sounds. Your basic idea os very nice. That said, is the off-time intentional? It ends up creating a very dissonant, unexpected vibe. Is that what you were going for?
I like the off-beat, dissonant vibe of the track. It does very well in creating an atmosphere of chaos and disorder.
I never knew nuts could be so dramatic. The beat put in about 15 seconds into the piece really caught me off guard. Good use of the chaotic technique.
Interesting and imaginative piece. Good build up at the beginning. To improve the piece a little more: you could change the pitch of the nut sounds at some poing to give it a bit of variety.
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