I like how well the intro beat matched the background melody! In addition, the crescendoing loop ("All is Violent, All is Bright") was well-chosen in terms of timing with the narration. My only comment is perhaps to fade out the background music over a longer period of time-- it ended in the middle of a measure, whereas two more notes would leave a better conclusion.
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Tonya Sedgwick
Posted on 2014-11-17 15:32:43 -0500.
I think this is excellent. I like the crescendo throughout the piece, because it slowly increases the amount of tension while the character talks about giving up equality.
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Amanda Marano
Posted on 2014-11-17 19:11:05 -0500.
I commented on "Chinese Room Argument + Music", "Giver Realization", and "Green Eggs and Ham and Music".
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asdfadfa
Posted on 2014-11-17 23:23:34 -0500.
I thought this was very good. It starts quiet and crescendos as you progress in the monologue and the tension starts to build. It's definitely accentuating what's going on without being overbearing at all, the voice is still totally the focus of what's going on.
I like how well the intro beat matched the background melody! In addition, the crescendoing loop ("All is Violent, All is Bright") was well-chosen in terms of timing with the narration. My only comment is perhaps to fade out the background music over a longer period of time-- it ended in the middle of a measure, whereas two more notes would leave a better conclusion.
I think this is excellent. I like the crescendo throughout the piece, because it slowly increases the amount of tension while the character talks about giving up equality.
I commented on "Chinese Room Argument + Music", "Giver Realization", and "Green Eggs and Ham and Music".
I thought this was very good. It starts quiet and crescendos as you progress in the monologue and the tension starts to build. It's definitely accentuating what's going on without being overbearing at all, the voice is still totally the focus of what's going on.
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