Amanda Marano
Posted on 2014-09-02 21:56:56 -0400.
I looked at the powerpoint after reading the description, and then after had to read the description again because I really didn't understand how this project related to your group at all. I think, while obviously this took time and effort, it relies a little too much on the description in order to get the message across that it is in fact describing a group instead of trying just to tell a joke that is, frankly, confusing and overly laid with detail that doesn't really make sense until you read the description.
I looked at the powerpoint after reading the description, and then after had to read the description again because I really didn't understand how this project related to your group at all. I think, while obviously this took time and effort, it relies a little too much on the description in order to get the message across that it is in fact describing a group instead of trying just to tell a joke that is, frankly, confusing and overly laid with detail that doesn't really make sense until you read the description.
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