Post-War Bride

Hello!

First of all, I really love your rendition of the original painting. It's very well-blended and is effective in evoking a feeling of hopelessness and destruction. I also love how you chose to add more detail into the factory setting, while abstracting away the bride herself, leaving behind only a veil to symbolize her existence. With the current technology, your piece is definitely more vividly complex, and I even venture to say that it engages the audience more so than the original. However, I wonder if your product really fulfills the purpose of the assignment, which was to abstract away from the painting itself and condense your experience in an artistic way.

I really liked that to convey how you felt looking at the original, you more or less remade the original to fit how you felt. Placing it in a church and an abandoned steel mill portrayed your original interpretation of duality very nicely.