Lord Of The Rings

I really like your choice of background music as the climax of the excerpt approaches. It might have been nice to add a change in background music as the climax passes and gollum falls, rather than to only use a fade out. Good work!

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This was such a great use of background effects and loops! I really enjoyed the buildup that you created at the end. I actually think that, with respect to the reading, your form might be binary - at the beginning was the soft piano, and from the middle to the end is the dramatic orchestral part.

I love the beginning with the lightning, it really caught my attention and set the mood. Mine had the same music you did, and I agree that it set the tone really well. It was a interesting buildup as well in the end and you clearly achieved the effect.

I thought the fire effect was definitely a nice touch to represent being in a volcano. The music was very good, noticeable but never overbearing.