Abhishek Tayal
Posted on 2014-11-19 21:36:39 -0500.
I like how you break your piece up. The way you've set up your Marimba is pretty interesting as well. The little bit of echo adds a ton of character. One question, how did you manage that last section? It seems like you used a single track for the rest of your song, and branched into two or three for that last part.
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Jorge Sastre
Posted on 2014-11-20 00:14:31 -0500.
Good piece! Just a small detail: the final fade out is a bit too sudden
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Amal Sahay
Posted on 2014-11-20 00:16:37 -0500.
Taken individually, each section is nice! My only gripe is the transition between sections - and that in particular is perhaps just a personal issue. It just seems to me that you had a nice theme at the start that is sort of abandoned in favor of the one note transition - maybe look to extend the theme? But otherwise, I like the story, and think this is a good piece!
I like how you break your piece up. The way you've set up your Marimba is pretty interesting as well. The little bit of echo adds a ton of character. One question, how did you manage that last section? It seems like you used a single track for the rest of your song, and branched into two or three for that last part.
Good piece! Just a small detail: the final fade out is a bit too sudden
Taken individually, each section is nice! My only gripe is the transition between sections - and that in particular is perhaps just a personal issue. It just seems to me that you had a nice theme at the start that is sort of abandoned in favor of the one note transition - maybe look to extend the theme? But otherwise, I like the story, and think this is a good piece!
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