November 10th, 2014
I've gotta say you capture the mood you're going for really well. That feeling of being trapped? It really shines through. I liked how suddenly you transitioned from one sound to another at several points. To be honest, what drew me to yours was how jagged your waveform looked to begin with. You manage to make it a frustrating piece to listen to; so much so that by the end I genuinely felt like tearing something.
Your piece is really rhythmic, and you worked together each beat from your recorded sounds very well. I also really liked how your alternated the pitch of the car horn in the end, and brought back a sound that you had used earlier in the piece. One thing that might be interested to hear would be how the sounds all work when layered on top of each other, especially if the sound built up at the end. It might make it sound even more "trapping."
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